Throughout this grand scheme of things you'll receive a B+ just for hard work. Where you lost me was first on the details. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, let me reveal to you what exactly did give good results. The text is definitely extremely convincing and that is possibly why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, whilst I can easily see the jumps in reason you come up with, I am not necessarily sure of how you seem to unite the details which in turn produce the actual final result. For now I will subscribe to your point however trust in the future you actually link the dots better.

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